I am awed by how you managed to make this come together. When I first read the rough draft, it seemed like a daunting task! But you have TOTALLY made it work, and the portion that initially I struggled with (Ariadne's dream) is now my FAVORITE FAVORITE!!! With Eames' dream as a close second, both of them are just vivid AND dreamlike and harrowing and moving....auuugh, I FLAIL INCOHERENTLY!!!
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2011-03-03 06:16 pm (UTC)My hat, as always, is off to you.