Holy shit, Jay, this was absolutely gorgeous. I adore your poetic style, as always, so smooth and sensuous, and I love the MOOD of this so much--it's like drinking honey wine, reading this. And I love more than anything where they end up, that one perfect, totally embodied moment of clarity and peace. The separation from everything else that reminds you who you are. It's enchanting and seductive and simple, all at the same time--thank you for this! ♥
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Date: 2011-10-28 11:13 pm (UTC)