labyrinth2015: (Default)
[personal profile] labyrinth2015
Thank you to everyone for their kind words and feedback on my short passionate R-rated love vignette. Thanks to the awesome feedback (and seriously amazing shout-out from [livejournal.com profile] clionona: I'm so not worthy, babe!), I am much less terrified of wading into the charged R!waters.

But first up, so you all don't lose all respect for me, ha ha, some quasi-serious verse.  [livejournal.com profile] fieryrogue was, for a variety of reasons, recently demanding Cookleta haiku, which I haven't written since first year high school.  My poetry muse (Calliope?) struggled with the kind of weird, too-brief poetic form (three lines: 5 syllables, then 7, then 5 again), until I realised the haiku was supposed to be meant for the awesome band of Cookleta fanfic writers and cheerleaders - addressed to their amazing, talented fic and words.

And, accordingly,my muse addresses [livejournal.com profile] fieryrogue, [livejournal.com profile] slashophile's gorgeous No Fate But Your Own Fate, [personal profile] lire_casander's epic Reaching for the Stars, [livejournal.com profile] clionona's Thirst, [personal profile] storylandqueen 's Barriers!fic,  [livejournal.com profile] rajkumari905's hilarious, hot In(Sobriety), [livejournal.com profile] motherendurance's mammoth Oceanic Descent[livejournal.com profile] epicflailer's As Old As Rhyme, [livejournal.com profile] hopefulgenius' the minor fall, [livejournal.com profile] irishdf  and [livejournal.com profile] magickaldreamer.

ETA: Added a haiku for [livejournal.com profile] maimiejay's awesome Suburbia!

You girls are just the best. Anyone else similarly drawn to the haiku slam, I would be so delighted if you were to post your offerings! Or, of course, if anyone wants a haiku - for themselves or their own fic, or someone else's, I would be happy to oblige.

Title: Haiku for You:
Pairing: The Davids
Rating: From G to PG-13 (kind of difficult to make R haiku, yk)

Haiku For You



(For Bobbie)

Impermanence

Cook thinks he's found love
with a kiss on the neck
he loses himself
 

*
(For Britts)

no fate but

you know this is fate
when love catches you off-guard
like an avalanche


(For Maria)

reach for this

"It may kill you, Cook."

"I need to do this, for him.
Sing my song with me?"

*
(For B, and VampCook!)

undead things

The boy smiles, so brave,
And his dead heart beats again.

"Cook, I'm not afraid."


(For CL)

barriers

You're leaving? Oh, then
hold me tonight, one last time:
and never again.

*
(For Pri)

Sober

David makes a plan:
pretends to be drunk so that
Cook will make him his.


(For Renata)

Descent

Tethys swims the deep
And gifts one soul with her song -
- Cook is mesmerized.

*
(For Nat)

As Old as Time

Librarian, lost;
Trapped by a reluctant Beast -
Beauty's saved by Love.


(For Meggie) 

lift, and fall

you slam the door, and
sit with your head in your hands.
(baby, please come back.)

*
(For Dee)

The Universe Points Here

Giving in to love:
This is where it all begins.
You, and no one else.

*

(For Robyn)

Music

David loves to sing:
Makes music, when making love.

Cook loves to listen.

*
Edited to add: (For Penrith)

No Escape From This

Action: put your hand
against this, my deepest self.
Feel my reaction.

*
(For Amy)

Beneath The Flowers

Wisteria Lane:
Where lives a beautiful boy.
Cook loses his heart.

*fin*

*

Edited Further to Add: This is for [livejournal.com profile] conditionelle's amazingly written Kradamfic, In the Mirror of Invention. Woman, in my dreams, I write like you.


(For Conditionelle)

le passe simple

Leaving her behind:
From major, a simple shift
to minor falling.

x
*fin*

 

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

Profile

labyrinth2015: (Default)
labyrinth2015

July 2016

S M T W T F S
     12
3456789
10111213141516
17181920212223
24252627 282930
31      

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 1st, 2025 12:33 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios